Wednesday, July 18, 2012

A Taste of CROSSFIRE...

Well, revisions on the second book of the Darkride Chronicles, Crossfire, are coming  along. I'm about eight chapters into the revisions now, and I hope to be able to pick up the pace as I get deeper into the book - and as my kids go back to school! Yesterday I got the chance to work on one of the chapters written from Emmie's point of view. Here's a little "taste."

       "Do it, I’m thinking, Do it! My blood hums like the wire of an electric fence when you wrap your hand around it on a dare. He leans in and runs the very tip of his fangs over the soft curve of my neck, not hard enough to break the skin, just hard enough to send little tremors skating through me. I moan low in my chest. I can feel him so close to the sweet spot I want to scream, want to squirm, but I force myself to stay still, frozen, like if I move he might run away. I give a little whimper. “Please.”
        That’s all he’s got to hear. His fangs pierce me so hard I cry out. My blood bubbles up like champagne when the cork is popped and with it comes the rush, the insane happy that goes with being bit."

Can't wait to share more with you soon!

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